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I write this poem on public toilet stallwalls where-ever I go
(but in only pencil, because I am a thought-full graffiti-er):
smile smile smile smile
smile smile smile
smile smile smile smile smile smile smile

now I think every time I do, I will take a picture
and keep a collection of public toilet stallwall poems.

heart string tied hearts
they always kissed with their heart in their mouth, no wait
it was on their lips,
instead of their sleeves

in the Charlotte's Web animated movie, when Charlotte tells Wilbur "i'm languishing to tell you the truth,"
she says it like she doesn't know what it means, and with the wrong accents.
I picked that up when I was seven, because I ran off to look up "languishing," thinking, from the way she said it, it meant she had some horrendous secret to tell.

and I must be a small r romantic, for I found Jo's marriage to Mr Bhaer quite unsatisfactory. she should have remained alone forever, only to fall for Laurie decades too late, and pour her secret sorrow into a million brilliant and celebrated novels.

why is "the smell" on my interests list? what smell?
doused in alcohol, crimson and magenta, burnt mouth, grazed knees, whatever.

Date: 2003-07-23 10:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] machinegunhand.livejournal.com
I've always thought that Jo and Laurie should've ended up together. I'm a sap, though.

Date: 2003-07-23 10:57 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
sorrow by itself never made for a brilliant anything.

Date: 2003-07-23 11:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] altarego.livejournal.com
I think I shall, for the rest of my life, search bathroom stall walls for your poetry now.

(and I entirely concur on with your dissatisfaction with Little Women's ending)

Date: 2003-07-23 12:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] swung.livejournal.com
that movie always gave me uncomfortable feelings.

Date: 2003-07-24 11:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] turnonthedark.livejournal.com
I always felt the same way about Jo and Mr. Bhaer (even though he's a crusty old sweetheart) plus I never liked Amy much and its disappointing that she ended up with Laurie.

Date: 2003-07-24 07:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stardragon.livejournal.com
i love your poem.

Date: 2003-07-25 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
i don't fucking miss YOU. rotmfl woooooooooooooooHOOOOOOOOOOOweeeeeeheeeeeeeeeheeeeeeeeeeheeeeeeee!

you're not gay. you're just a fag.

Date: 2003-07-25 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
:)

Date: 2003-07-28 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missmicah.livejournal.com
I absolutely adore your writting. its spontanious but not without being detialed. keep up the awesome work!

Date: 2003-07-29 06:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nudetulip.livejournal.com
the smile smile smile thing is a very cute idea. (eyed deer?) you never cease to amaze me.

Date: 2003-07-30 07:45 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
all hateful shit aside, i just wanted you to know that the dope thing was never an excuse. it's just a fact. i had been dipping into that beaker every day about 2 or 3 times a day for nearly two weeks before everything started to go hazy on me. i never said anything about it before, one, because i thought it was obvious and, two, because it's illegal.

move on, be a sad alcoholic whore, whatever flips your pancakes. i know i was better to you than most, in spite of that last week.

the sun shines still shines for me. i'll save my love for someone who knows what to do with it.

just so you know.

Date: 2003-07-30 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
i'll never pay for that divorce. i paid enough for you. and i never wanted it anyway. i lost my kanoggin for a sec there but it didn't merit all that. you're no better than i am.

yeah, and krist novelachuck too, fartbreath.

Date: 2003-08-02 01:53 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
alternative fucking testicle, bitch.




fuck you and your woopdeedoo beach.

see cause only

Date: 2003-08-03 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
whores do shit like that here. you're inhuman. you revel in that sort of thing only cause it sounds cool in comic books but you're the real villain, dude. to everyone. not just me. lucky you're somebody's baby.

for some reason i'm being attacked by long-legged sexy wimmens all over town. you're slowly being erased. crazy fuckin bitch and that's from the gods themselves...

Date: 2003-08-07 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
i don't think i miss you so much as i miss me and the way i felt when everything was rainy and new. you never get that back. not even you. especially you. so, it's okay.

you're a boring slut.

Date: 2003-08-08 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
:)

from any perspective, you're still a cunt..

Date: 2003-08-13 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
.

i'm going to outlive you

Date: 2003-08-14 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
.

Date: 2003-08-25 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Jess-

What happened to unpuppet.com? Is it down temporarily, or for good? It was so very beautiful...

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